Bohemian Square

My roleplay story

feeds@yuku.com (Satine2901) — Sat, 22 Dec 2007 15:46:05 GMT

Well i wrote a story for my roleplay character(Satine from Moulin Rouge) but added a few details about her childhood and also keep her alive. Tell me honestly what you think please. Im not sure if i really should use this.

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Bonjour, im Satine, but nowadays better known as the sparkling diamond.
I dont know much about my parents, but my mom was a courtesan and dancer - like i am now - and my dad...

Poems in german

feeds@yuku.com (Alhana) — Tue, 21 Nov 2006 21:46:36 GMT

Is there at least anyone who would be interested in a poem in german?
Perhaps with a bit of time I could translate them into english but for now my lowly works of art are all in my first language which is sad to say.
Maybe I should just translate.
Just wanted to now if there are and perhaps how many german speaking, writing people there are on this board.
Excuse again for my rotten english. The last sentence didnt sounded right even to my ears.

MR fanfiction-Satine's beginning.

feeds@yuku.com (Satine515) — Tue, 07 Nov 2006 18:24:21 GMT

This is a fanfic that I started on nicolekidmanunited.com, but I'm obviously not done yet. Here are the first four chapters. Tell me what you think. I'll be writing a new chapter really soon.

Chapter 1

Satine gazed longingly out of her window as she lay on the pink satin sheets of her bed. Snow was falling gently from the sky. She saw carriages passing her house on the streets, people dressed lavishly, getting ready to go out to the theater. She wished with everything inside...

SHORT STORY: Liberation of the Soul (A story about Love)

feeds@yuku.com (DirectorSS) — Mon, 10 Apr 2006 09:34:49 GMT

This was an english assignment to boot. Basically a tragic epic love story which imposes my beliefs about love, sex, racism, religion, and so on and so on.

Tell me what you guys think. Oh and tell me if you cried.

CAUTION: It is 4 pages long.

LIBERATION OF THE HEART.

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Poetry by a Penniless Poet like Moi

feeds@yuku.com (DirectorSS) — Thu, 02 Mar 2006 13:38:14 GMT

...or not - we shall see (dun dun duunnn..!)

Here goes.. a few poems I thought of sharing with you guys. I'll be adding to this thread every now and then...

BUTTERFLY

It is true:
They need her no more.
They talk to her no more.
They want her no more.

It is true:
Her butterfly eyes glow no more.
Her thin complexion gleams no more.
Her blissful smile beams...

Zoey's Poetry Thread

feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) — Mon, 21 Nov 2005 14:06:41 GMT

Eyes [NMR]

For English class we had to write a paragraph about anything, and this is what I wrote:

"When you look at him, the first thing you notice are the eyes. They are two big pools of sadness, filled with crystal clear water. They stare at you, hurt and confused, like an overgrown puppy dog, but also with a deeply sensual nature. The long black lashes seem to extend forever, as if they're beckoning...

Dear Diary (NMR) PG

feeds@yuku.com (fallin2hell) — Sun, 20 Nov 2005 03:36:22 GMT

Chapter 1
Dear Diary,
Hey there! This is my first entry so I might as well introduce myself. Well, actually, I need to create a character for you first. Let's see, what name would you like? What about Annabelle, that's my favourite name. Oh, sorry, that's going to be the name of my first girl. I want three children, I don't mind which sex but I would like at least one girl. My top three girls' names are Annabelle, Lisa and Emma. My top three boys' names are Liam, Ronan and Mark. Oops...

Azuresoul's Poetry

feeds@yuku.com (azuresoul) — Wed, 26 Oct 2005 03:40:30 GMT

I wrote this when I was kinda in a strange mood, but tell me what you think anyways:

I can't say those three words your soul longs to hear,
It would fall upon
Dead ears.
But as I say, to your
Lifeless eyes,
"I love you,"
My heart dies.

A love that will live forever

feeds@yuku.com (Allie Wilson) — Thu, 29 Sep 2005 22:51:03 GMT

A new fanfic? yes...hope you it

It was a day like no other, A cold christmas morning. Crisp, sweet, and just a tad nippy. Looking down upon the quiet morning, it seemed almost unfit for the underworld of monatre. Just as the clock struck eight a thin layer of soft white powdery snow began to fall on Monatre. Looking around now it seemed almost too perfect, if there was such a thing.
"Christan?" Satine growned "Christian!" Satine said more awake now...

GHOST - FFic, plz tell me what u think

feeds@yuku.com (azuresoul) — Sun, 25 Sep 2005 11:54:23 GMT

A parody of a parody (the ideas in the movie kinda fittd well 4 a parody of MR)

Here's the 1st bit, please tell me what you think:

GHOST

CHAPTER 1:

Christian sat up in his bed, sweating madly. He had finally managed to get to sleep, but all he could see was her. He'd only just left the hospital a few hours ago, and it had taken him hours to get to sleep.

Every time he closed his eyes, all he could see was her again; eyes wide open and...

THE Moulin Rouge song

feeds@yuku.com (azuresoul) — Wed, 14 Sep 2005 13:18:12 GMT

I was listening to this song, and I thought of MR, because it seemed like it was almost written for it.

James Blunt - Goodbye my lover

Now think of the scenes where Satine dies - and afterwards, and try not to cry!! I did! (And not want to hug C and go *aaaaawwwwww*! lol

(If you don't know the song, here are the lyrics)(And if you do know the song, read the lyrics, and try not to *weep*! Poor Christian....

Did I disappoint you or let you...

Fanfic - their first night together

feeds@yuku.com (azuresoul) — Tue, 13 Sep 2005 09:26:54 GMT

Please tell me what you think about this! ANY comments at all would be much appreciated:

The First Night
by azuresoul
POV of Christian, Satine, and "Narrator"

It was a few evenings since they had kissed in the elephant for the first time. Christian's heart was leaping all over the place as he gazed in Satine's eyes - the pure pools of azure. This was not his first time; but it was different this time, for a reason he couldn't explain. Satine wasn't at all...

Heaven Awaiting 2

feeds@yuku.com (superhaz) — Sun, 28 Aug 2005 05:57:23 GMT

****Notes****
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OK, here's the sequel!
Well, after publishing Moulin Rouge, Christian becomes famous before he succumbs to consumption. And then he is reunited with Satine in Heaven!

So now what happens??? Well, I've decided to base this on A Life Less Ordinary (another great Ewan film!), and Christian and Satine are the angels who have to bring the two soulmates on Earth together!
A nice bit of cheesy, fluffy fun, ENJOY!!!!

p.s....

Heaven Awaiting

feeds@yuku.com (superhaz) — Tue, 23 Aug 2005 02:24:55 GMT

***Notes*****
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OK, so here it is: My first MR fanfic! Hope you enjoy.
It might seem sad at first, but it has a very happy ending, so don't worry!
And yes, Satine's a Leo lol! August 9th, very random, but hey ^__^ Please excuse any mistakes I make... It is a fanfic after all!

Please note, this fanfic does contain a sex scene (or a memory of one anyway :P) and although it's brief I've had to rate this fanfic PG-13. But it should pose no problem!...

Pearl drops. [a new fanfic]

feeds@yuku.com (Allie Wilson) — Mon, 22 Aug 2005 01:33:07 GMT

Droplets, like some kind of pearl ran down her face as he got his moneys worth. She only had one thing to tide her over, the thought that she would indeed someday 'fly away'. When he was satisfied [It seemed to have taken for ever] he had only one thing to say to her "Give my regards to Harold, he runs a tight shift" He said while getting dressed, cackling almost. When he finally left Satine sat up with the covers up around her chest. She began crying again. This was no life, Lying,...

My Poetry

feeds@yuku.com (superhaz) — Sun, 14 Aug 2005 03:07:33 GMT

Well, I write LOADS so I thought I'd share some of my work with you! Sorry for any inaccuracies you come across!

I've written a series of MR fanfics called Heaven Awaiting, as soon as I put them on my fansite, I'll be sure to give you the link!

Some of my poetry:

Jayme's Poetry

feeds@yuku.com (PoeticChick) — Fri, 05 Aug 2005 05:48:10 GMT

As my old thread might have been lost in the vortex I decided to start another one! MC made me realize how long it had been since I posted some here, so let's change that! It's been a while, so apologies if I ever posted some of these before.

This first one I started a long time ago but still tweak from time to time, I'm not sure if I'm completely satisfied...

Satine's Secret

feeds@yuku.com (rubyrainbow115(d)) — Mon, 25 Jul 2005 12:11:47 GMT

This is my first fanfic I hope you guys like it!

Notes: What if Satine was never taken over by comsumption? Would she live happily ever with Christian? Or will her past catch up with her?

~~~~~~~ means flashback or dream
*text* means thinking
------------ means pov changes
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Satine lives on...

feeds@yuku.com (Allie Wilson) — Mon, 30 May 2005 23:19:43 GMT

Satine lives on...

Satine, Satine? wake up, wake up Satine, come, it's time to wake up darling. Satine opened her eyes slowly, she looked around the room, she was in a hospital. "Where, where am i? Is that you Christian?" said Satine.
"Yes darling it's me, your OK now, your safe, the Dukes gone, we're free." said Christian he bent down over her bed and kissed her forehead. He looked into her astonishingly blue eyes, she knew he loved her, and she loved him....

Poetry by Allie Wilson

feeds@yuku.com (Allie Wilson) — Thu, 26 May 2005 02:43:20 GMT

Once upon an impossible love,
That the angels blessed from high above,
There was a story, about a time, about a place,
A story that had an unpleable case,
A love that was forbidden, and unspoken of by all,
Until these two lovers were spotted, and had to take the fall,
Zidler told Satine, "Go to the boy, tell him it's over!"
But it was far from over!
I'll write a song!" Said Christian, in his sweet loving voice
But she didn't break it off, she...